tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post2492416499465589864..comments2023-08-17T11:04:19.748-04:00Comments on submission & metaphor: Stream of submissive subconsciousnessoatmeal girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12842608615972752000noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-27388514432168364082008-11-02T07:33:00.000-05:002008-11-02T07:33:00.000-05:00the last 6 lines - lovely. not that the rest of it...the last 6 lines - lovely. <BR/><BR/>not that the rest of it wasn't i hasten to add, but the last 6 lines were the ones that really did it for me. they could sit alone as their own poem, i think.mamacrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16484565827023574347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-42166556628193435232008-11-01T15:14:00.000-04:002008-11-01T15:14:00.000-04:00Your words flow very powerfully.Thank you for shar...Your words flow very powerfully.<BR/>Thank you for sharing.<BR/><BR/>Olivia<BR/>xOliviaMannershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17185920649570209079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-5071343941937625012008-11-01T10:42:00.000-04:002008-11-01T10:42:00.000-04:00Oatmeal Girl, yes I like this very much.Warm hugs,...Oatmeal Girl, yes I like this very much.<BR/>Warm hugs,<BR/>Paul.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03790580459962602757noreply@blogger.com