tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post5351618909920887288..comments2023-08-17T11:04:19.748-04:00Comments on submission & metaphor: Power Lossoatmeal girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12842608615972752000noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-27593530844675400132008-06-08T23:25:00.000-04:002008-06-08T23:25:00.000-04:00paul, you said the exact right thing. thank you ev...paul, you said the exact right thing. thank you ever so much for appreciating my writing as writing. i do care about the language, though i msut admit that i'm sometimes surprised at what i end up with. i'm afraid if i think about it too much it will sound forced.<BR/><BR/>alice, i do love that phrase, which is one of those that just sort of flowed out. so thanks for reminding me of it. (i find it a little embarrassing that i like my own writing, but at the same time it feels good. i really am starting to think of myself as a writer, and that makes me glow inside. now if only i could write something that i wouldn't be ashamed to share with my parents...)<BR/><BR/>thanks again to both of you.oatmeal girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12842608615972752000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-80151964063048717982008-06-06T19:37:00.000-04:002008-06-06T19:37:00.000-04:00OG,This is so lovely. It makes me wish to be with ...OG,<BR/>This is so lovely. It makes me wish to be with Him in a power outage too. The phrase, "to exist in a world without immediacy." is wonderful. We should all take time to slow down ans turn off the world sometimes.<BR/>AliceAlicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03027350217120088046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-47881424530356116742008-06-06T14:33:00.000-04:002008-06-06T14:33:00.000-04:00Oatmeal Girl, I love the way you use our language,...Oatmeal Girl, I love the way you use our language, it sends shivers down my spine, good shivers.<BR/>I hope that your wish comes true in all it's aspects.<BR/>Warm hugs,<BR/>Paul.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03790580459962602757noreply@blogger.com