tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post766001333539823232..comments2023-08-17T11:04:19.748-04:00Comments on submission & metaphor: Gift exchangeoatmeal girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12842608615972752000noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-25411929127139690972012-05-05T13:53:45.269-04:002012-05-05T13:53:45.269-04:00Your poetry makes me want to return to my former ...Your poetry makes me want to return to my former lover purely for her many physical gifts and skills. sigh.. should I?Ken Machttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09100185198750536244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-10406674347508468112012-05-01T19:23:16.833-04:002012-05-01T19:23:16.833-04:00I must say, I usually skip over anyone's poem ...I must say, I usually skip over anyone's poem posts and the like, but I had to stop and read this one. It was wonderful.Leahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17213567388808206135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-7703030962925824712012-04-29T20:50:50.988-04:002012-04-29T20:50:50.988-04:00Beautiful! Thank you for sharing.Beautiful! Thank you for sharing.charlottenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-59659436699885218722012-04-29T17:37:49.342-04:002012-04-29T17:37:49.342-04:00Thank you.
He thought so, too. Especially as I ha...Thank you.<br /><br />He thought so, too. Especially as I hadn't given him a proper poem in a long time. He was very, very pleased.<br /><br />I tried to make it a proper sonnet, but I think iambic pentameter is too leisurely for me.oatmeal girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12842608615972752000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-7413247660117252652012-04-29T17:34:36.395-04:002012-04-29T17:34:36.395-04:00that's LOVELY!that's LOVELY!mamacrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16484565827023574347noreply@blogger.com