tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post8225011833029601518..comments2023-08-17T11:04:19.748-04:00Comments on submission & metaphor: I suppose I should be frightenedoatmeal girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12842608615972752000noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-80726623821123159292009-04-12T19:50:00.000-04:002009-04-12T19:50:00.000-04:00as one who has worn acrylic nails for the last 20 ...as one who has worn acrylic nails for the last 20 years, I can't stand my real nails. I certainly understand and appreciate your opinion - not everyone likes them.<BR/><BR/>I've been having a conversation with Daddy about my submitting to his pain and his darker fantasies. He struggles with this as he loves me so. It's a real mix of pain and pleasure for him as well.<BR/><BR/>I've always thought that to show one's vulnerability in truth shows one's great strength and depth.<BR/><BR/>The rip tide is always greater down below where few ever suspect it. It can pull you down before you ever realize it, and suddenly, you're in over your head, and you can't breathe.<BR/><BR/>Pain is such a great tool for insight!Kristy Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01984274010654489462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-12518948905280352262009-04-12T17:35:00.000-04:002009-04-12T17:35:00.000-04:00selkie - what i am learning stuns me, and the fact...selkie - what i am learning stuns me, and the fact that he is willing to let me see inside his pain moves me deeply.<BR/><BR/>i actually hate really long nails, cutesy pah, and artificial nails would just creep me out. besides, privacy is important, and my friends would think something was definitely up if i was spotted with long, fire engine red nails. saved by the need for subtlety!<BR/><BR/>i don't actually know the song. but i know a lot of the wolf and my throat and his teeth. he is not gentle.<BR/><BR/>Liras - in fact, i am rarely frightened. and when i have been truly frightened, he has rethought how to get from me what he needs without going past what i can handle. i am both stunned and grateful that he is willing to make such adjustments, which seem to belie his own rules.<BR/><BR/>mamacrow - i was surprised that he didn't pooh-pooh that last section. the image was so strong for me, the desire to do that, to hold his head in my lap and just be there for him as he recovered from the reaction to what he'd done. the reference to Yiddish lullabies is another personal reference. the poem really was an offering to him, and i was surprised when he offered permission on his own for me to post it.oatmeal girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12842608615972752000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-88601007784856847952009-04-12T16:59:00.000-04:002009-04-12T16:59:00.000-04:00cutsey pah - you omitted the best line! Wolf: I be...cutsey pah - you omitted the best line! Wolf: I bet you say that to all the boys... :D Gotta love Meat. He was my first live gig.<BR/><BR/>'and yet this silly poet,<BR/>who really should know better,<BR/>has just this foolish wish –<BR/>to hold his head in her bare lap<BR/>until the sickness ebbs away,<BR/>while singing Yiddish lullabies<BR/>in that unguarded breathy voice<BR/>that makes him tightly grip the chain<BR/>and never set me free.'<BR/><BR/>this is beautiful OG, the sweetest thing you've written (that I've read).<BR/><BR/>I'm agog with speculation over the private nails reference!mamacrowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16484565827023574347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-61505162037306533142009-04-11T22:47:00.000-04:002009-04-11T22:47:00.000-04:00Frightened? No such thing!Frightened? <BR/><BR/>No such thing!Lirashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14909126636303822521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-68037326235756404772009-04-11T17:56:00.000-04:002009-04-11T17:56:00.000-04:00beautiful writing as always, sweetie. and remembe...beautiful writing as always, sweetie. <BR/><BR/>and remember, artificial nails are actually stronger than the real thing.<BR/><BR/>oh yes, and this piece reminds me of the beginning lines of "Took The Words Right Out of My Mouth" by Meatloaf. Remember this?<BR/><BR/>Man: On a hot summer night, would you offer your throat to the wolf with the red roses?<BR/><BR/>Woman: Will he offer me his teeth?<BR/><BR/>Man: Yes.<BR/><BR/>Woman: Will he offer me his jaws?<BR/><BR/>Man: Yes.<BR/><BR/>Woman: Will he offer me his hunger?<BR/><BR/>Man: Yes.<BR/><BR/>Woman: Again, will he offer me his hunger?<BR/><BR/>Man: Yes.<BR/><BR/>Woman: And will he starve without me?<BR/><BR/>Man: Yes.<BR/><BR/><BR/>Woman: And does he love me?<BR/><BR/>Man: Yes.<BR/><BR/><BR/>Woman: Yes.<BR/><BR/>**********************************<BR/>hmmm...... werewolves and vampires make the most delicious lovers.....cutesypahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07954055832006760974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-30422582391619264512009-04-11T17:25:00.000-04:002009-04-11T17:25:00.000-04:00OG- sometimes I think sadists (at lesat the non-so...OG- sometimes I think sadists (at lesat the non-sociopathic ones) suffer more than we do. Beautiful haunting piece.selkiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01713419374194169822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-48604936887710482152009-04-11T13:31:00.000-04:002009-04-11T13:31:00.000-04:00Thank you. This is one of the most naked pieces I'...Thank you. This is one of the most naked pieces I've ever written for him. But how else could I respond to what he wrote me? I've never thought of a sadist as someone who suffers, but slowly, bit by bit, I'm beginning to understand his own pain.oatmeal girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12842608615972752000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-22335574414247172932009-04-11T13:26:00.000-04:002009-04-11T13:26:00.000-04:00wow! i'm speechless. forever humbled by your bea...wow! i'm speechless. forever humbled by your beautifully haunting poetry.baby girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13606487892168910110noreply@blogger.com