tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post8549963617989899330..comments2023-08-17T11:04:19.748-04:00Comments on submission & metaphor: The Performanceoatmeal girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12842608615972752000noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-78550579634050993122008-03-19T21:24:00.000-04:002008-03-19T21:24:00.000-04:00thanks. i'm a bit embarrassed to admit that i knew...thanks. i'm a bit embarrassed to admit that i knew it was lovely right after i wrote it. in fact, somehow i felt Shon's influence in that line. i'm a very big fan of his.oatmeal girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12842608615972752000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1165603762522014470.post-14544613022068012312008-03-11T23:54:00.000-04:002008-03-11T23:54:00.000-04:00"And from the seats that ringed the stage, fountai..."And from the seats that ringed the stage, fountains of cum burst forth like fireworks and shot towards the ceiling."<BR/><BR/>Just lovely.Musnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15953559179999651719noreply@blogger.com